Sunday, January 19, 2014

Outline 002

PHILIP BLACKWOOD MYSTERIES #1
Outline 002


Sc 01 - BRITNEY BRIMES (25) is in the kitchen and sees a LITTLE BOY out of the corner of her eye.  She doesn't hear anything, just turns to see the boy running out of the kitchen.

Britney follows the boy, but he's not in the living room.  She walks on to the storage room, and finds the Little Boy standing there, staring at her, looking unhappy.  She tells him she's seen the little girl, but never seen him.  The Little Boy doesn't answer.

Does he know the little girl?  Is he is her friend?

The Little Boy says, "I'm not a boy," his voice deepens, his eyes become dark sockets, and he morphs, "I'm the Debbul."

Britney screams and flees.

Sc 02 - ALEX agrees to do TIFFANI a favor an investigate the BRIMES Family's case.

Sc 03 - ALEX and TIFFANI meet with CARLTON BRIMES.  Carlton and Tiffani fill Alex in on the history of the case.

Sc 04 - ALEX explains to CARTON BRIMES (and TIFFANI) that it may not be possible to figure this case out.  We just don't know enough about the paranormal.  He tries not to get their hopes up.  But Carlton just really ants answers, and Tiffani believes in Alex's abilities (which is probably false hope, though Alex doesn't want to out-and-out tell her that).

Sc 05 - TIFFANI doesn't want to pressure ALEX to help the Brimes family, but he can tell she's forcing herself not to pressure him.

Sc 06 - First Investigation Begins: ALEX, TIFFANI and her team...

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Sc 09 - ALEX isn't sure if either CARLTON BRIMES or BRITNEY BRIMES are sane... How can he fulfill his promise (to help them out) to Tiffani?

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Sc 14 - Tiffani finds out that there was a low-rent apartment complex on the land for a couple of years before the land was bought by the Tiger Group out of Japan.

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Sc 16 - ALEX walks into the kitchen to find BRITNEY staring, silent.  He asks what's up and Britney asks doesn't he see her.  Her?  Britney points.  Alex doesn't see anything.  Britney insists that "she" is right there!  Alex walks slowly toward the spot, his hand outstretched, feeling.  Alex stops cold when he feels a tiny hand grab his own hand.  He reacts physically and AT THE SAME TIME Britney says, "Did you feel that?  She just grabbed your hand!"

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Sc 23 - ALEX and TIFFANI learn that CARLTON BRIMES thinks that BRITNEY BRIMES accidentally scratched ARIEL BRIMES and he wants them off the case!

Sc 24 - This is ALEX's excuse to quite the case... But he can't.  He has to figure this out for his own reasons!

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Sc 30 - ALEX knows that BRITNEY didn't accidentally scratch ARIEL!

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Sc 37 - ALEX makes a deal with the ELEMENTAL: Inside belongs to the Brimmes family and outside belongs to the Elemental.

Sc 38 - ALEX explains to POE that he doesn't have to protect Doddy anymore, no one can hurt them where they are now.

Sc 39 - ALEX explains all.  The BRIMMES Family is safe here.

Sc 40 - TIFFANI and ALEX are having lunch to discuss how the Brimmes family is doing now.  Tiffani asks Alex one final question about the Brimmes case...


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This was during the initial slow-going stage.

According to the Properties of this file, it was created on December 7, 2013 at 11:22:20 pm.  Technically, that's the day before the Properties of "Outline 001" claim it was created, so I'm not sure I can trust those dates.  But that's a month and 12 days ago, which is revealing enough.

If you've been following my narrative so far, I suspect this is fairly self-explanatory.

So shall we move along?

:)

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